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Jon and Carol came in as they do
every day
she clutching a bit of cloth to
her face and being unable
to give me an honest look and
Jon being overly enthusiastic about
his coming meal
(I am a goddess because I
bring them food.)

They met each
other outside the bathroom,
gazed across the table with a fifty
year old expression
and the only emotion I have
ever heard in Carol's
ancient, cracking voice
is when she calls him baby

Repeatedly I wonder, if or when
I give up my mind
to age and black eyes,
will we do this? Drink tea
with too much sugar
and have a waitress that will
be overly concerned if we
don't show our wrinkled mugs?

I prepared bags of fruit for
smoothies and watched her
spill beans and rice all
over the checkered floor-
he told her to tell us
about the mess that was made
in a vaguely apologetic
tone. She instead
asked for more vegetables
and said the
Malawisaurus
fucked it all up.

Jon told me
I'm his favorite because
I smile like a porn star or
born star- his uncertainty
of either and the likelihood
of both made me stand
curious
and jut out my good
hip at my boss to ask
"should I be offended?"

I have never called anyone baby,
because it always reminded me of
a squirming squalling soiled infant
until now.
I want you to taste the
word on my lips.

Let's meet outside the bathroom
when we're old and I'm a retired teacher-
you'll show young women articles you
like in National Geographic
and I'll see
no one but you.

Jon and Carol left, but
before they went she took other
people's dishes to the
bus tubs and he waited in
the car for her to stumble in
with her hair
flying like crows,
away from him and back
again, as she always does.

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This sucks, but I'm still drunk and eating cheese in bed.

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Given 2011-12-15
Regulars by *crimson-regret Suggester Writes: Part slice of life, part end of life, part love story. All brilliant ( Suggested by *neonxaos and Featured by ^Beccalicious )
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~Michael-MacDonald Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Photographer
Cool :D.
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*neonxaos Dec 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Congratulations, babe. I am so damn proud of you.
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:iconcrimson-regret:
Thank you so damn much, love. From the bottom of my mad old lady heart.
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Chirp, congrats on the DD. A day belated, but it's been twittered. :)
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:iconcrimson-regret:
Much obliged! :D I'm grateful!
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That was awesome. :D
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:iconcrimson-regret:
Thank you! I'm glad you like it.
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*leyghan Dec 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
This is a wonderful piece. Like a story within a story. I loved every line. :+fav:
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